Writing Workshop: a housewarming party

In the Writing Workshop series, we work together to improve our writing skills: to learn how to write better and more correctly in English.

You see below a poorly written text with quite a few mistakes. Our task for this workshop is to spot the mistakes and write a correct version of the text.

My sister-in-law, Emma, has recently moved into a new flat, so she threw a little housewarming party the last weekend. There were only six of us: Emma and a friend of her, my husband and me, and finally my brother-in-law and her girlfriend Julie. We really enjoyed us. The best two things about the party was the food and the music.

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Nathalie V
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5 months ago

My sister-in-law, Emma, recently moved in a new flat, then she threw a little housewarming party last weekend. There were only six of us: an Emma’s friend, my husband and I, and finally my brother-in-law and his girlfriend Julie. We really enjoyed each other. The two best things about the party were food and music.

Nathalie V
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5 months ago

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the food and music.

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