What are run-on sentences and how to get rid of them


A run-on sentence is two or more independent clauses incorrectly presented in a single sentence. They are considered bad because they can be distracting to readers and prevent the writer from clearly communicating information.


So what is an “independent clause”?

In grammar, a clause is a group of words that includes a subject and a verb, and forms a sentence or part of a sentence.

A sentence consists of one or more clauses.

This sentence has one clause:

  • Please contact us.

And this sentence has two clauses:

  • If you need help, please contact us.

In the above sentence, ‘please contact us’ is an independent clause (because it can exist independently as a complete sentence, but ‘if you need help” is a dependent clause because it is not complete by itself and needs to be attached to another clause to form a sentence.

Now that you understand what dependent and independent clauses are, we can get back to run-on sentences.


Let’s read the definition of run-on sentences one more time:

A run-on sentence is two or more independent clauses incorrectly presented in a single sentence.

Here is an example:

  • She loves dancing she goes to the dance club every weekend. (Not correct!)

This is probably the most common type of run-on sentences. It is called a “fused sentence”, when two or more independent clauses are included in a single sentence with no punctuation between them.

Here is another example:

  • The boy ran across the road, it was really dangerous. (Not correct!)

This is a “comma splice”, when two or more independent clauses are included in a single sentence separated only by commas.


Fortunately, there are easy ways to get rid of run-on sentences.

Look at these run-on sentences:

  • She is charming everybody likes her. (Not correct!)
  • She is charming, everybody likes her. (Not correct!)

The first way to correct them is to simply separate your two independent clauses with a full-stop (period in American English). Make each one of them a separate sentence:

  • She is charming. Everybody likes her.

The second way is to use a semicolon, which we only use this method when the two clauses are closely related.

  • She is charming; everybody likes her.

The third way is to use a comma and a connecting conjunction (and, but, so, or, nor, for):

  • She is charming, and everybody likes her.

And finally, a more sophisticated way to fix a run-on is to turn one of the independent clauses into a dependent clause:

  • Because she is charming, everybody likes her.
  • She is charming, which is why everybody likes her.

You see? Correcting run-on sentence is a piece of cake, a walk in the park, child’s play, a breeze!

See ya!


(Don’t forget to do the activities in the Gym to further consolidate what you have learnt!)

ENGLISH GYM

THIS IS THE GYM. LET’S BUILD SOME LANGUAGE MUSCLE!

This content is only available to members. If you are a member:

Please log in here...

Not a member yet?

Get a free account here...

0 0 votes
Article Rating
Subscribe
Notify of
0 Comments
Inline Feedbacks
View all comments.
0
Would love to hear your thoughts...x
()
x